2010年7月22日星期四

(story) 1st dream storyline

A large bed sits in the lonely of nowhere. Alex sleeps on there. Nice, comfortable sleeping.
Suddenly, a train sounds begun to rush in to his ears. Alex wonders where the sound comes from is. We only have a mini sky train besides our building, it can’t be that loud. I must in my dream.
“Best friend, back to back. “Someone whispers.
A feeling of uncomfortableness touches him. He rolling on the bed keeps his eyes on. No one wants to be wake up in a warm nice sleep.
“Best friend, back to back”. Is the sound getting louder, or, he gets closer?
“Em?”
Dame ! I am in the dream again.
While Alex realizes the situation, he is in the dream again.
He opens his eyes.
Searching for the sounds.
Making the blanket closer.
“Best friend, back to back. “The sounds clouds like storm.
The shadow covers all axle’s face , but can’t cover his fearness growing in his eyes.

(story) whole story plan

Act 1
Inciting incident: the nightmare shows us the main question what and why is “best friend, back to back.”
1st turn point: when Alex wakes up, he wants to know why he has this dream.
Act2
• Alex get out of room, and talking to Kara who is working on her homework.
Midpoint: after Alex talks to his room Kara, to calm down and find out what he wants do then.
Second turn point: Alex gets nightmare again, and feeling frustrated and powerless. The word “best friend, back to back” can be hear in the really world.
Act3
Climax: Alex accidentally fall down on the ground, see the dead body under his bed.

2010年7月21日星期三
















(story) 1st dream part. shoting splits

dream part....
extrem big top shot.

silence.
train pass. hua,da. hua,da. huada. light flesh on his face.
joo barely move a little
train passed.
silence.
best friend, back to back. (minimal) camera begin to circle down. geting focuing on joo's upper body. wired back sound up
best friend, back to back ( sound,up)
best friend, back to back (almost clean hear. at this point, camera focusing on the upperbody) sound down
,joo open his eyes, searching ofr things
silence.
(kill sound up)
deadie's arm out , cirle from the wist.
joo looking down to see what happen.(cut ot extrem close shot on joo's eye and mouth part.)
sound up. with a shadown get closer to joo's face
yeild and back out.
best friend, back to back.
(wake up)

best friend back to back. mian shtory line and shot needs.

best friend, back to back.
joo always hear " best friend back to back" in his dream. it turns out a dead body of his friend, alx, is hidden under the bed.

mian charachers. 3 . oscar ( dead), 2 different nation people. one girl one boy. ( balance
the gender)
location my apartment and the bule screen at school.
special sound need track from hiqicoco

first dream 3
talk in the night 1 or 2 shots
second dream
finding out. 3 shots
flash back. 1 or 2shot