(story) 1st dream part. shoting splits

dream part....
extrem big top shot.

silence.
train pass. hua,da. hua,da. huada. light flesh on his face.
joo barely move a little
train passed.
silence.
best friend, back to back. (minimal) camera begin to circle down. geting focuing on joo's upper body. wired back sound up
best friend, back to back ( sound,up)
best friend, back to back (almost clean hear. at this point, camera focusing on the upperbody) sound down
,joo open his eyes, searching ofr things
silence.
(kill sound up)
deadie's arm out , cirle from the wist.
joo looking down to see what happen.(cut ot extrem close shot on joo's eye and mouth part.)
sound up. with a shadown get closer to joo's face
yeild and back out.
best friend, back to back.
(wake up)